: The Chief's last two lines ruined it for me. They were so cheesey and
: absolutely unnecessary, that they took a nice moment and really messed it
: up. We're not stupid. When Lasky says 'we're not machines' and the chief
: turns his head, that's all we need. We know what he's thinking. If I were
: editing this cutscene I would have done away with the lines. In fact, why
: not edit them out now?

: I like my version 10x better. Went from cringeworthy to kinda cool. What do
: you guys think?

: http://halo4.isnotcanon.net/video/ending_recut.mov

You could cut even more. Lansky has diarrhea of the mouth. You may only need to foley/dub MC at one point though.

- M