: --------UPDATE No.1--------
: I've updated the design.
: 1) I've adjusted the emblem on the take by making it larger and warping it to
: fit the curves of the tank better.
: 2) I've also added shading to the confetti so it'll fall in line with the
: rest of the image.
: 3) I've also gone ahead and submitted to Threadless. I should hear back in a
: few days if they approve it for the voting process.

I have some constructive criticism if you want it.

The only thing that would keep me from buying that shirt, is the fact that the streamers and debris comes up around the neck and around the side. I know that's kind of petty, but sleek, minimalist designs are really in style now and having the design flowing out and up like you do doesn't fit with that.

However, that is just me. I'm sure tons of people would buy this because honestly, that is one of the best quality illustrations on a shirt I have ever seen from Halo.
I wouldn't be giving you hard criticism if I didn't think you had done a seriously top-tier job. So good job man :)