I agree about the camera/view moving around like that, and I question starting with the Flood, unless they're going to be the main enemy, and I like the Flood but even I don't want that. As I hinted at, I'd like to know what the deal is with the ships and the Halo too-- I figured that would be revealed later and pretty much any questions would be answered with "you'll find out", but you have a point about a player coming into this going, "Why am I seeing this? What does this have to do with anything? WTF is going on?". I also question having the Chief put on the MJOLNIR after he clears out the last area, but it takes a while and it allows for that last line, so it's hard to think how it could be better.