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Definitely a good buy. :)
Date: 2/15/14 5:54 pm
In Response To: Mayflower #1 *OT, IMGs* (Leviathan)

It took me a little while to actually get it from the website to the comic-reader on my iPad, but I think that might be more because I don't actually buy comics all that often.

Very interesting read, and I'm liking where you're taking the story. The last character introduced certainly has piqued my interest, and the world feels pretty fully realized. I only wish we could have spent more time in the Commonwealth, exploring some of the history, locations, and characters, but I imagine there is only so much you can create in a limited time. I think it's definitely a better idea to hit the ground running and have a release schedule that's a little less comfortable, as you mentioned in the ending section (makes me think of this video, which you might take some inspiration from if you haven't seen it already: ). Also loving what you're doing with that feedback bit in the end. For the record, any communications I make regarding Mayflower can be used from now until forever. I don't want to have to post that every time I drop some feedback on a new issue, but you can feel free to email me for clarification if you like.

If I could make a recommendation, I feel like the art could be a little bolder. Brighter colors, whiter whites, blacker blacks… I think it could use a little extra push to really have that contrast that will make it pop! :)
Then again, the worn out, almost-faded colors might be an intentional effect on your part. You're the creator, and certainly trained in art to a higher degree than myself, so do with that feedback what you will...

But yeah, very interested in what's coming in the future. I'm not much of a comic guy, but you've got a devoted buyer in me as long as I'm aware of each new issue. :)

Messages In This Thread

Mayflower #1 *OT, IMGs*Leviathan2/13/14 7:47 pm
     Totally worth my money *NM*ZackDark2/13/14 8:28 pm
     Sold! *NM*Vincent2/13/14 10:20 pm
     Loved it. Great work, Levi :) *NM*TDSpiral2/14/14 2:41 am
           Glad you like it! *NM*Leviathan2/14/14 12:05 pm
     Re: Mayflower #1 *OT, IMGs*ChrisTheeCrappy2/14/14 10:41 am
     Definitely a good buy. :)Postmortem2/15/14 5:54 pm
           Re: Definitely a good buy. :)Leviathan2/15/14 9:21 pm
                 Re: Definitely a good buy. :)Postmortem2/16/14 12:14 am
     SQUEEEArithmomaniac2/15/14 7:39 pm
           Re: SQUEEELeviathan2/15/14 9:27 pm

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