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Very interesting read, and I'm liking where you're taking the story. The last character introduced certainly has piqued my interest, and the world feels pretty fully realized. I only wish we could have spent more time in the Commonwealth, exploring some of the history, locations, and characters, but I imagine there is only so much you can create in a limited time. I think it's definitely a better idea to hit the ground running and have a release schedule that's a little less comfortable, as you mentioned in the ending section (makes me think of this video, which you might take some inspiration from if you haven't seen it already: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rDjrOaoHz9s ). Also loving what you're doing with that feedback bit in the end. For the record, any communications I make regarding Mayflower can be used from now until forever. I don't want to have to post that every time I drop some feedback on a new issue, but you can feel free to email me for clarification if you like.
If I could make a recommendation, I feel like the art could be a little bolder. Brighter colors, whiter whites, blacker blacks… I think it could use a little extra push to really have that contrast that will make it pop! :)
Then again, the worn out, almost-faded colors might be an intentional effect on your part. You're the creator, and certainly trained in art to a higher degree than myself, so do with that feedback what you will...
But yeah, very interested in what's coming in the future. I'm not much of a comic guy, but you've got a devoted buyer in me as long as I'm aware of each new issue. :)
Mayflower #1 *OT, IMGs* | Leviathan | 2/13/14 7:47 pm |
Totally worth my money *NM* | ZackDark | 2/13/14 8:28 pm |
Sold! *NM* | Vincent | 2/13/14 10:20 pm |
Loved it. Great work, Levi :) *NM* | TDSpiral | 2/14/14 2:41 am |
Glad you like it! *NM* | Leviathan | 2/14/14 12:05 pm |
Re: Mayflower #1 *OT, IMGs* | ChrisTheeCrappy | 2/14/14 10:41 am |
Definitely a good buy. :) | Postmortem | 2/15/14 5:54 pm |
Re: Definitely a good buy. :) | Leviathan | 2/15/14 9:21 pm |
Re: Definitely a good buy. :) | Postmortem | 2/16/14 12:14 am |
SQUEEE | Arithmomaniac | 2/15/14 7:39 pm |
Re: SQUEEE | Leviathan | 2/15/14 9:27 pm |