: Level 4: He goes into the Barrier to cross it. He
: encounters nothing for several days and then finally
: stumbles across the armies of Bonegrinder, one of the
: Fallen Lords never mentioned in Myth. They get in a
: fight and the Watcher must prevail.
This doesn't seem to fit. What's the point of this level? It doesn't really connect to anything else..sorta breaks the gameplay.
: Level 5: The Watcher has entered the Dire Marsh. He plans
: an ambush for gr'Uman, the archer who's killed in
: "The Road North" in TFL. You must kill
: gr'Uman, but Soulblighter's forces are around too.
: They may attack you as well because the Fallen Lords
: are always fighting each other.
The Fallen Lords aren't always fighting eachother. The Deceiver and Watcher have it out for eachother but most of the time they all get along. They don't try to kill eachother every chance they get. But setting an ambush for gr'Uman is a cool idea. Setting up some buried thrall like in the original level would be pretty neat too :)
: Level 6: Soulblighter has engaged the Legion's rearguard.
: The Watcher wants to kill them both. He attacks when
: they are busy fighting and tries to wipe them both
: out.
Doesn't makesense. There's no way he could take them both even if he wanted to.
: Level 7: The Watcher has made his final stand. The rest
: of Soulblighter's army and the Legion are trying to
: kill him. He must be protected and his attackers
: crushed.
Final stand from what? According to you he's kicking ass :) It would be cool if he was turned to stone by the Legion and you have to protect his body from the "100 volunteers".
: Epiloge: The Watcher remains in the Dire Marsh, realizing
: that Balor can probably take care of himself. He is
: wrong and Balor is killed, but now the Watcher is free
: from his bond with Balor. He continues to live in the
: Dire Marsh with his large army of undead and studies
: the dark arts. Soulblighter (he's not dead yet) comes
: to attack him but the Watcher beats him in a sorcery
: duel. Soulblighter retreats to the Untamed Lands where
: he remains until Myth II, plotting his revenge.
Cool idea though. With a couple of the flaws worked out it could be a great campaign.
Good luck :)
-Mumbles
