: A little bit of grammar clean-up and this should go...
: somewhere. It's more of a Sonn(tm) stlye than a Spleaf
: style, but I'm sure you could think of somewhere to
: stick it in legends.
Yeah, when I'm done with all of Genesis I'm gonna go through, clean it all up (I've already made a few changes on the versions on my HD), and post it around the net; in the Misc section of Myth@Borg, on alt.games.myth, in the Mill's articles thing, and anywhere else that would want it.
BTW, the grammar is all verbatib from the King James version of the Bible (I'm using an online source; www.trellis.net/users/freshwaters/htmlbible/index.htm), I'm just replacing words with other words and in some cases phrases with other phrases, but the grammar is all theirs.
I agree it could be a lot better, and somewhere packed up with all my old books is the New International version of the Bible, which is a lot more sensible by any standard (direct translation from the original Hebrew to modern English, with footnotes on translation included), but I can't find that online and actually retyping it all would be too much work.
PS: Sonn(tm) = Soon(tm), I take it?
