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The main problem I see is that GURPS says the bre'Unor have never been observed to speak civilized languages. I see nothing about Antero that would cause them to make an exception. lso, there's nothing in GURPS that would indicate they would not kill someone when given the chance. Unfortunately, this wrecks the premise for the journal entry.
As far as your story, it assumes b'Ylaggo has real power, but there's nothing wrong with that.
