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Re: Sounds like an awesome story this way *PIC*

Posted By: ~zeph~ (194.125.156.135)
Date: 9/13/2003 at 5:18 p.m.

In Response To: Sounds like an awesome story this way (Seraph)

: I'm a little skeptical. You're either (generally)
: "truly exceptional" or you're not.
: So unless you've got some magic corruption eating at him
: already, or something...I'm not sure I agree.
: Is that what you meant?

Well I always assumed that truly exceptional meant a person pure of heart.

In addition I think that Ravanna's part should be played up a bit, and there should be some suggestion of her future magical power. All in all a bit more three dimensionality to the Characters would be nice. Oh and maybe a fifth person could be added to the Heroes and he dies half way through and returns in the last level as Phelot.

-zeph

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