: 'Tis good. The only thing is that Alric never sounded to
: me a sentimental or poetic character. I they gonna die
: he will tell his men that they're gonna die rather
: than a long and encouraging speech. But as I said 'tis
: very good, I liked the style.
Listen, these men know they're about to be slaughtered. Any good leader, political, economic, religious, military - whatever - knows that they have to give the men some kind of hope. Otherwise, they'd probably have been crushed almost instantly, and Alric's diversion would have failed.
: "Lo! Praise the prowess of Legions' people
: Of sword armed men in millenias long sped!"
: A little modification to "Beowulf".
: Knight o' Death.
Doom
