: No spelling errors. They are great at Grammar! But for
: me, they lack the style. They are the same as we see
: in the game. Why don't you try to change it and add
: some philosophy, emotion, agression, rage and courage,
: of course.
AAAAUUUGGGHHH!!!! EDGAR?! complementing SERAPH?! AAAUUUGGGHHH!!!!!!
seriously though, I wasn't going to post in this thread, but now... there are actually a coupla' spelling errors (leave it to Mister Grammaticus Correctivus, himself!), one more obvious one, of course, being, "Maelduin" (correct: Maeldun). Also, I believe that it's "liege," not "leige"; and "Ceiscoran," not "Ceisoran." that would be it for spelling.
Also, Seraph, some suggestions: "spell his doom" in the Avatara text, though I appreciate any reference to my good self, would perhaps sound more refined as "seal his fate."
The rest are, more or less, satisfactory (good-natured sarcasm, there ;þ) though somewhat short after the avatara quote...
Vry Good, seraph.
Wow. Seraph and Edgar may end up getting along. I need to start running, screaming, etc., in horror/panic/terror.
;þ
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