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Re: Flavor Texts to read over
Posted By: Edgar Birben (mstr195175-23136.dial-in.ttnet.net.tr)
Date: 1/19/2003 at 2:54 p.m.
In Response To: Flavor Texts to read over (Seraph)
No spelling errors. They are great at Grammar! But for me, they lack the style. They are the same as we see in the game. Why don't you try to change it and add some philosophy, emotion, agression, rage and courage, of course.
Messages In This Thread
- Flavor Texts to read over
Seraph (adsl-66-120-162-196.dsl.sntc01.pacbell.net) -- 1/19/2003 at 12:51 p.m.
- Re: Flavor Texts to read over
Edgar Birben (mstr195175-23136.dial-in.ttnet.net.tr) -- 1/19/2003 at 2:54 p.m.
- Re: Flavor Texts to read over
Ghôlsbane (194.200.95.218) -- 1/19/2003 at 3:15 p.m.
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