: My way of criticizing: Ýt is great. But it would be
: better to add more dread to the concept. Approach with
: a different angle to make it more original...
: unfortunately, this fanfic has the same start,same
: mood... Add more secondary topics to the main
: topic...just increase the quality...(Ý hope Ý am not
: misunderstood.)
: Seraph's way of criticizing: "This is the worst
: fanfic Ý have ever seen in my life. Ýt totally sucks.
: Ýt is like a 7 year old child's diary. Ýf you start a
: professional career as a writer, we would face the
: true armageddon! You write like a noob, what the heck
: happened to you Doom! No insults meant:)"----
: This is the part Ý like most...:)
I disagree with your statement about my way of critizing, and besides a few grammer/spelling kinds of things (And phrasing.."...a combined army of the North"...Just doesn't sound right to me, but I'm picky)
As a more important thing than Doom's way of writing, I'm insulted by your comment, Edgar. Its not true, and I'm not even sure where its based on truth.
And if you say it was a joke, well, I'm not laughing. I have enough of a problem with the inmature level of things I -have- written, I don't want to have to put up with more of them that someone makes up that sound funny or what not.
Going back to a less ugly topic, Congrats on the fan fic, doom.
Seraph
