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Re: Madrigal Journal

Posted By: Edgar Birben (mstr195175-23217.dial-in.ttnet.net.tr)
Date: 1/17/2003 at 1:54 p.m.

In Response To: Re: Madrigal Journal (Doom)

My way of criticizing:
Ýt is great. But it would be better to add more dread to the concept. Approach with a different angle to make it more original... unfortunately, this fanfic has the same start,same mood... Add more secondary topics to the main topic...just increase the quality...(Ý hope Ý am not misunderstood.)
Seraph's way of criticizing:
"This is the worst fanfic Ý have ever seen in my life. Ýt totally sucks. Ýt is like a 7 year old child's diary. Ýf you start a professional career as a writer, we would face the true armageddon! You write like a noob, what the heck happened to you Doom! No insults meant:)"---- This is the part Ý like most...:)

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