REALLY good - only criticism that comes to midn is maybe instewad of "The Forest Giants...
But the Forset Giants are gone"
have "The Forest Giants...but the Forest Giants are gone."
I',m guessing you're trying to write his thoughts, as if he's musing on the Giants and then telling himself that there's no pint in doing so, they've left, and I think that if all on one line it'll flow better.
Amd Sir_General: What about MY fanfic, inspired by your delightful argument about more original narrators:
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Avon's Grove:
Rarrrrr. GRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRR. Uh. Schnar.
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Ar. Farr.
