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Re: Trow Flavor Text

Posted By: Doom (207.239.12.200)
Date: 1/9/2003 at 10:26 a.m.

In Response To: Trow Flavor Text (Edgar Birben)

: " Stone resembles vitality, mud resembles the purity
: of the nature,iron resembles the power... With three
: combined, flesh and muscle are worthless..."

nb... (don't take it the wrong way, I never, Ever say extremes like "great!" or "excellent!" ('specially not about my own work. I'm too much of a perfectionist for my own good))

Suggestion: Flesh (as in the part of the body that becomes the kind of meat that most people (especially Americans) eat) ismuscle... so saying "flesh and muscle" is a little redundant. "flesh and bone" may be a better substitute, and it's a more common phrasing of the effect I think you're trying to achieve...

Mud=Pure??? That's a different approach...

dm.

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