: "...The very sun was shadowed by the dust of the
: Myrkridia..but the Heron Guard charged through their
: ranks like a scythe mowing grain.."
mb changed "charged" to "sliced" or "slashed"...sounds more violent.
Few more for myrdred...
"The greatest power one holds in this world is to own a soul...or two...or three...or four..."
"'And you, tiny one, would dare to defy ME?!' the trow laughed, "yes" replied myrdred, "I i would". And the trow knew no more."
"Some think him not a man, but an unholy spirit born of flesh, an anomoly who, through some freakish twist of nature, has entered unto our world..."
"He pits brother against brother, flesh against flesh, gaining perverse pleasure in his holds over others wills..."
