: I meant that when you first started posting your journal
: fics here, you used many of the phrases that appeared
: in the Bungie journals word for word. I was making the
: point that you do less of this now and I realise that
: wasn't too clear when I first said it.
*smiles in the way embarrassed people do when they try to hide it*
Oh yes, I remember all to well now. That first piece I sent in was full of cliches and other problems. I'm kind of amazed that you've helped me become a better writer by your Editer work, since there isn't really an obligation on your part.
Of course, you are a good person, and you're doing something a good person would.
So, many thanks for it.
A question though, what would be a good name for a piece about the Heron Guards returning to Llancarfan seen through the eyes of one of the Guard?
I think I called it in [very] rough draft form Ruins of Glory.
Seraph
