: Typos and aesthetic points fixed in [ ]
: A bit of a cliché perhaps?
Perhaps. I'll see if I can find out some other properties that would make sense.
: Good, although I'm somewhat skeptical of the title making
: an appearance in the text.
The title was mostly put there so I would have something to call it besides "Seraph's story", but good point.
: Nice, I agree that the Eastern army may have known
: nothing of the Head.
: Well written with less clichés from the games as usual.
: Keep it up Seraph.
I love writing, and I love myth. The combo is fun.
"...less cliches from the games as usual" means that I use less cliches than most of our would be Fan Fiction authors, or what?
Thanks for the compliments and the editing. I'll go check over my prevous work for the stuff you wanted before you post it.
Seraph
