: Wonderful work zeph!
: A few relatively minor errors in it of the
: grammer/spelling nature.
Well I tried to keep to British spelling, which the Myth I was written in, and grammer, I disagreed with Word grammer check a few times.
: It does a wonderful job of making Alric's inner fears
: (For surely even Alric is afraid of something...come
: on!) come out, clearly showing his human side.
: My compliments to you for writting this, and my request
: to do a semisquel, set just before the Gate of Storms
: level, or maybe a prequel, I'm not sure.
Well correctly placed thats chapter II or III, before this the first 6 levels would be told, I jumped the gun cos I was thinking of how to add depth to Myth's characters and this scene came to mind.
On a sequel, hopefully, going back to school will mean I'll have less time but I'll have a try.
-zeph
