: Once more the Avatara Diarmuid writes...
: Date unknown, near Sinac’s camp.
: Apparently Balor had already began searching [begun to search] for the
: mystic tomes and artifacts of the Avatara, but his
: efforts will be for naught. After fighting off an
: advance force of Balor’s army we were forced to flee
: by a large force of Thrall and Soulless, but not
: before we were able to find the Book of Lanreb. I had
: just enough barely had [which one?] time to grab it, before we had
: to destroy the other tomes, to prevent their capture
: by the Fallen Lords.
: My sorrow was cut short however, as we could not afford
: to let any of the knowledge of the Avatara fall in to
: the hands of the Dark.
: .
: Reinforcements of [get rid of "of"] from the main force defending Seven
: Gates have reached us, lead by Aethelwulf, one of the
: most respected warriors in the Province. We plan to
: use them, and the handful of other Llancarfan soldiers
: that have survived, in our next battles.
: The Berserk Gwyon has come running in to camp with grave
: news. The Shade Sinac’s has found a great source of
: power, which he luckily does not understand how to use
: yet. We must stop him now, while we still have a
: chance.
: A small elite group of men, lead by Aethelwulf will
: attack Sinac’s camp, and destroy him.
: (END STORY)
Good, just a few minor edits which I put in [ ].
: By the way, I'm posting the fight for Bagrada as the
: "Prologue".
: Any questions, comments, beer kegs, shotguns,
: compliments, German Sausage, and anything else you
: might think of, post here or e-mail me.
: Seraph
When you have edited all three parts, email them to me at gholsbane@bungie.org with your name and email address as you would like them displayed and I'll put them up.
