: Seraph, I still think it's too long. The average journal
: entry from the games is about 200. Yours almost
: reaches twice that. If you can cut it down I'll stick
: it in JF otherwhise it'll have to stay in OF, unless I
: can be convinced...
too long...hmmm.
I'll work on that.
How much room (in 12 point font, in a word document) should 200 words take up? I don't want to count them.
Anything else I should work on? (Grammer and spelling not counting since I can just check that after I rewrite it)
Also, I don't care if this is posted as Journal Fiction or other Fiction, since this is not from the prespective of a Journal Writer type person anyway.
Seraph