Wow! Good to get some feedback on the story, especially positive feedback. I wrote that late last year in between exams for Sandman's 'Wrath of the Journeyman' solo campaign, which sadly never got off of the ground. I didn't think the story would see the light of day (monitor?) until Iron posted it a few months back.
Feel free to expand on the story if you wish. The characters in it are hardly mine, all of them were designd by Sandman. Basically he gave me their names and demeanours, and I was forced to go from there. I'd be interested to see what you come up with.
: 1) Journal Writer in Heron Guard
I'm of the belief he's a lowly warrior.
: 2) Phelot still around and doing something
Agreed.
: 3) Deciever still around and doing something
Up to you I guess, I have no opinion.
: 4) Alric still around and active
He'd better be, otherwise he's got no focus for his rage.
A word of advice, I'd just write what I thought best suited my vision for the piece. A glaring error like Balor's presence might be out of the question, but answering questions that Bungie left unanswered is definately good.
LR
