: My way of criticizing: İt is great. But it would be
: better to add more dread to the concept. Approach with
: a different angle to make it more original...
: unfortunately, this fanfic has the same start,same
: mood... Add more secondary topics to the main
: topic...just increase the quality...(İ hope İ am not
: Seraph's way of criticizing: "This is the worst
: fanfic İ have ever seen in my life. İt totally sucks.
: İt is like a 7 year old child's diary. İf you start a
: professional career as a writer, we would face the
: true armageddon! You write like a noob, what the heck
: happened to you Doom! No insults meant:)"----
: This is the part İ like most...:)
I disagree with your statement about my way of critizing, and besides a few grammer/spelling kinds of things (And phrasing.."...a combined army of the North"...Just doesn't sound right to me, but I'm picky)
As a more important thing than Doom's way of writing, I'm insulted by your comment, Edgar. Its not true, and I'm not even sure where its based on truth.
And if you say it was a joke, well, I'm not laughing. I have enough of a problem with the inmature level of things I -have- written, I don't want to have to put up with more of them that someone makes up that sound funny or what not.
Going back to a less ugly topic, Congrats on the fan fic, doom.