BRAVO LORD RAVEN!
BRAVO!
Seriously excelent writting...
At least 4 stars.
Thirtenn Moon Bloody Tree doesn't sound like the very model of a Heron Guard (not that I'm saying it's bad... just different then I thought)
Questions.
1) How did you come up with the idea for the story?
2) What is Bloody Tree's problem with Alric?
3)I take it he is plotting revenge for not being allowed back into the ranks of the Heron Guard. Could you make a map or maps on this? Or at least tell us how this works out?
as I said earlier... very good work
Seraph