I liked it. I get the feeling the interactions between the S-IIs and Chief's initial actions should've been (even) more understated with how stoic they're all supposed to be, and I don't get the purpose of firing at the window (or whatever) before they crashed through it, I would think they still would've been able to crash through with momentum and had more of the element of surprise, but it worked and the ending was utilitarian and funny. (All it was missing was one of them lazily moving their arm just out of way of the sword or maybe taking it away, and then someone waving at the covies as they left the ship, but a wave would've again been a bit much.)