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Re: Website Feedback Needed (Off Topic)
By:davidfuchs
Date: 3/6/15 6:45 pm
In Response To: Website Feedback Needed (Off Topic) (SEspider)

: Back in December, 2014, my Secret Santa purchased me the URL I've been
: wanting for years. It ended up for sale while I didn't have the funds for
: it. But thanks to this awesome community, I now own it! WOOT!

: Anywho, I was paid for a art gig and able to get hosting for it and build a
: WordPress site. I'm new to using WordPress and still need to purchase a
: few plugins for it, but it's pretty much ready for viewing. I'm also
: working on addressing the store embedding issues.

: Any feedback, good or bad, would be much appreciated.
: If possible, Please leave feedback in the contact section of the site.

: Thank You and thanks again to my Secret Santa.

: http://sespider.com/

I think the logo you have is too busy at such a small size. Simplifying it would make it more legible (probably matte 2D).

Likewise the background you have for the top of the page is way too busy (it interferes with the white text over it.) A blur might help, or choosing a less busy montage of illustrations, or screening them back/tinting them.

The text for "services" is hard to read—it looks like it should be white or something but it's coming up as dingy grey and doesn't read well on the background.

Instead of the green text link to your portfolio on Facebook, I would suggest either a key image or perhaps a rotating set of images.


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Website Feedback Needed (Off Topic)SEspider3/6/15 3:53 pm
     Re: Website Feedback Needed (Off Topic)davidfuchs3/6/15 6:45 pm
           Re: Website Feedback Needed (Off Topic)SEspider3/7/15 5:30 pm

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